Edit Like a Curator
Delete redundancies and vague intensifiers. Replace “very unique” with a precise image. Use one striking verb instead of three qualifiers. Read paragraphs aloud; if you stumble, the sentence needs sanding. Invite subscribers to share a before–after sentence for feedback.
Edit Like a Curator
Active voice clarifies ownership and decision-making: “We lowered the sightline with a custom banquette” beats “A custom banquette was installed.” Clients want to know who leads, decides, and cares. Confidence reads as competence.